Second Draft Magazine Front Cover

This is the second draft of our magazine front cover.  We followed the feedback that was given to us and we feel that this magazine front cover follows the codes and conventions more and looks like a professional magazine cover.  We are very pleased with the outcome.

Second Draft Film Poster

After a lot of discussion within our group we have decided to use the blue tinted picture as our main image. We did this because we felt that it not only showed off our editing skills well but it is also aesthetically pleasing for our audience.  We took the feedback from our first draft on board and we feel, as a group, that this poster follows the codes and conventions of a film poster and is more eye catching for the audience. 

Magazine Front Cover Feedback

This is the feedback that we received from our first draft of the magazine front cover.  We took this onboard and are making the changes needed for our final magazine front cover.  This feedback is essential for us to get the best cover that appeals to our target audience and correctly follows all the codes and conventions of a magazine front cover.

Film Poster Feedback

This is the feedback that we received from our first draft.  We took this onboard and are making the changes needed for our final film poster.  This feedback is essential for us to get the best poster that appeals to our target audience and correctly follows all the codes and conventions of a film poster.

Updated Shot-List

Updated Script

EXT. Bus Stop
Faye is waiting at the bus stop, a bus pulls up and she gets on.

FAYE(voiceover)

This is me, probably the last time anybody ever saw me

INT.  Police Hallway Day
Suspects are sitting waiting to be interviewed

INT.  Police Interview Room / Day
Miss Rais is talking to the police

MISS RAIS

Who would do this to a girl like her?

INT. Councillor’s Office/Day
Faye is having her regular counselling session with Mrs Palmer, based around the other suspects.

MISS RAIS

So Faye, how are your issues?

FAYE

Fine.

MISS RAIS

Are you sure everything is fine?

INT.  Police Interview Room / Day
Finley is talking to the police

FINLEY

I wouldn’t let it go this far

INT.  Finley’s Car/Evening
Faye and Finley are sitting in Finley’s car and they are having a conversation which quickly progresses into a disagreement.

FAYE

So, what we getting for dinner then?

FINLEY

Get whatever you want

FAYE

Well what you having?

FINLEY

Dunno yet…

FAYE

Can you decide please

FINLEY

You decide!! Mum and Dad always put you first anyway…

FAYE

Do you know what……….

Faye gets out of the car and storms off as Finley drives away.

INT.  Police Interview Room / Day
Maddie is talking to the police

MADDIE

Weren’t me

EXT. Side Road/Day
Faye is walking down a side road.
Maddie approached Faye and barges her, pushing her up against a fence

MADDIE

Get out my way!

(Maddie pushes Faye up against a fence)

FAYE

I haven’t done anything

MADDIE

You’re here aren’t you?   MOVE!!

INT.  Police Interview Room / Day

ADAM

I couldn’t do this to her

INT. Faye’s Bedroom/Day
Faye and Adam are having a deep conversation in Faye’s bedroom

FAYE

You’ll always be my best friend

ADAM

What if I want more

FAYE

What if I don’t….

Adam gets up and leaves

INT. Mr and Mrs Browns House / Day
Mr and Mrs Brown are distraught that their daughter has gone missing and are currently speaking with two police officers who have been allocated to the case.

MRS BROWN

So what are you going to do about this?  What is going to happen?

POLICE 1

We are doing all that we can

MR BROWN

Well it doesn't look like it!

POLICE 2

You've got to let us know if you hear anything

Blank/Text-on-Screen
Police Officer is interviewing one of the suspects, as they believe that they are guilty.

POLICE OFFICER

Just admit to it.  We have all the evidence that we need to prove it was you….

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